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Heart Pounding

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Heart Pounding

Palms sweating, sweating, sweating
Heart Racing, racing, racing
I walk up the steps
Slowly, slowly, slowly
The lights turn on and they are so very bright
My mouth is dry and my face is red
This moment I have dread
All eyes on me, me, me
The time is now and I can't remember
My feet are shaking, my heart is beating
And I feel like fleeing
But I'm trapped, trapped, trapped
I open my mouth and not a sound comes out
My head is dizzy and my vision is blurred
The audience's faces start to whirl
And my vision fades to
Black, black, black
A prompt for the group: :iconlive-love-write: the theme was heart pounding! and though this a odd twist on things i think it fits quite nicely! :D let me know what you think!!

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RollingTomorrow's avatar
Thank you for participating in our prompt at #Live-Love-Write! :iconlajumpplz:

You did a good job with making the word repetition flow. :nod: You might want to experiment with using some HTML formatting to spice up the repetition if you like the look if it. :la: It'd help reinforce the feeling of an echo or fading thoughts.

Overall, you did a very good job of setting the mood in this piece! Keep up the good work! :highfive:


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